Saturday, October 10, 2009
Abu Laith al-Libi and Obama vs Hillary
Poetic Epitaph
Saddam's been waiting I hear, down there
down younger in the netherworld, waiting
for you Abu Laith, planning a big bash, with
lots of whores, booze and cash.
They say you worked hard for Allah, up
here, on earth, killing and robbing,
rapping and all sorts of nasty things...
things that would make a persons ears
ring, all in the name of Allah!
Now it's simply, a gravy train, all you
got to do, is find Allah, before the
devil-for it seems to me, He's also
been waiting for you.
#2201 1-31-2008
Obama vs. Hillary
And EK?
Obama, is somehow in a high because Sen. Edward Kennedy has put his arm around his shoulder, as if he was an Uncle Tom.
I do not know Obama that well, as far as a political person, or his views, but I do know Edward, and I'd not allow his hands over my shoulder when the camera was looking, Edward is what I would call, a cold blooded scavenger. Remember the book, "Dark Waters," by Joyce Otis... here is a guy when the chips get down, runs to a hole in the ground and like an ostrich, hides his head, hoping no one saw what he did, or have we all forgot he was responsible for the death of a young woman not so long ago. It is like having O.J. indorsing me for an honorary PH.D, forget it. I will not be surprised if this psychologically, penetrates in time, his parade of black followers, to shift to Hillary. People change alliances as fast as they change jelly for toast. Beware, there is no sacred ground, around the Kennedy family anymore, Camelot is empty.
Friday, October 9, 2009
Door to Tuol Sleng Prison
How many have walked on those wooden floors
Shackled like a butchered boar
How many, how many more:
Were put into those stifling, stone cells scared
How many, how many more:
Tasted brutality, worse than hell or war
Died on the brick of hunger,
Died slowly on the brick of psychosis
In Tuol Sleng Prison (Cambodia) forgotten!
How many, how many more:
Died with crushed bones, and skulls
How many grass eaters, vomited their guts
In Tuol Sleng Prison (Cambodia) forgotten!
How many died by the Khmer Rouge regime
How many died by Pol Pot and Kaing Guek Eav
First Poem: Longfellow's Window
It was perhaps May, the year was 1959; I was sitting on the top level of the attic steps, somewhat motionless, looking out the window into the backyard, we had a long hilly backyard, very green in the summer, grandpa cared for it like it was a treasure, proud, he even fenced it in after a number of years, after people trampled through it, as if it was a highway. The sunlight hit my face, it was a weekend and mother was downstairs doing something, perhaps housework, she was always busy. I had found some paper in a drawer and I slowly went to write, drawing my pen to paper, a word came forth, then writing again, a few more words, without looking at the paper my thoughts flowed through my mind, and my body was full of emotions. I slid the paper in front of my pen again, and noticed I had a stanza of some kind, then heard Grandpa’s old black mantel clock strike twice, it was 2:00 PM, next I went back into my silence, more like scratching with my pen now, words and syllables, rime and accents, trying to dance and sing with the pen, as words flowed onto the paper.
I re-read my first stanza, it would be, or become my first poem. I had listened to an old record [78] my mother had given me, by Jimmy Boyd, and so I came up with the name, “Who.” I think the song was named that, and it was a simple poem that needed a simple name, like the song. I had no idea of course I’d study poetry in the future, write 1400-poems, produce nine poetry books, and so forth and on. But that was the beginning, as all things must have a beginning, that is, all things must have its first step.
I found a second sheet of paper and copied the poem, and made the corrections I needed, it was now 4:00 PM, and dinnertime. (I had folded the poem, and put it into my pocket, asked my mother in her bedroom later if I could read it for her, and I did, and she liked it—of course, and then back into my pocket it went).
Next I went upstairs to the attic bedroom, where my brother and I slept, him on one side of the attic, myself on the other, a window in-between, this was on the opposite side of where the steps were, and the reason being the beds were there, was because the chimney stretched from the basement all the way through the attic, through the roof: too close to the window to put beds.
For the following week, I’d look out that window and figure poem two would have to be coming soon, and it would have to come out of that window, and it did. I was consumed, to realize I could express my emotions this way, instead of being crushed with them, holding them inside like excessive water.
It would be years later I’d venture out to see Henry W. Longfellow’s House, in Minneapolis, Minnesota, and gaze through his window; then after that, I’d purchase an expense signature of his (original), singed “Yours Truly Henry W. Longfellow…. 1877” a great poet indeed.
Thursday, October 8, 2009
Happiness Poem
If my ears could hear my computer screen, From one to another, they, too, would grin.
My keyboard types for my eyes not my tongue This happiness poem will never be sung.
But what of my eyes? Don't they shine? Yes, but not from this poem of mine.
The pen is mightier than the sword, But a pen can write only words.
The feelings I sense and the senses I feel For keyboard and screen remain far too real.
My ears and my nose remain at rest. My cheeks and hairline are doing their best.
But if this happiness poem could make my mouth smile, My face would forever dress up in style.
Poem To Children
I've scarcely now try to notice,
distracted by their rudeness.
These children are from mothers…
the ones that always make trouble,
turn me pale inside—yelling.
Parents! How late did you wakeup today?
With their deafness to poison me.
This poem from me…poem
that I’ve wanted to write!
A sudden relief fills my head!
I’m with my doubts, in which I’ll die
alone, and be called the ogre of the day.
Anyhow, here is a poem from me to
you…mothers (or parents) have forgotten
in which they only send me grief.
Ay, a poem that so many times have
I avoid writing, now saves me from
a pretentious world, which is too late
for them…for me, I’ve stop waiting.
Wednesday, October 7, 2009
Structure - For a Living Poem
Someone once said, "You don't need substance from or of a poem," I disagreed with that, silently, and then wrote about it later. We all have our opinions in literature and poetry not sure who is right and who is wrong, or if there is such things as right an wrong in writing, except for things you didn't intend to do, and you did.
Substance can mean matter, body, the essence or soul of the poem, and I suppose some poems do not have a soul, there is another element in substance though, I've yet to bring out, it is called 'Structure' or at least I call it that, or proclaim it to be part of substance, again, folks may differ with that.
Let me put it another way, I have a body, and that means I have structure, and in my body I have a soul. I am a living poem you could say. But let me go a little farther with this.
When a thing is composed of parts, it has what you call structure, meaning I have arms, legs, a head, torso, feet, hands, these to me are parts. When you put all this together you get me. On the other hand, a poem has parts, such as: words, sounds, tone, and they all fit together, or should if you want structure to your poem that is; another word for parts can be elements.
A part of the poem, or structure, is its form. Some call them lines, other folks may call them stanzas, as in a haiku, there is a shape or pattern developing here that will become part of the structure. In most haiku's there are seventeen syllables, I say in most, and three lines, but it varies by style, one can add a line or two if you change the style. The first and third lines have five syllables, and in the middle line are seven.
To some poets, and I am among them, they are unwillingness to submit themselves to rigid forms, although I have. My first book, "The Other Door," would fall under this style, the rigid form style, and many of my other poems, are of this style, out of my 2400-poems to this day, but most have not. Why?
Well let me say it with a correlation: why write something and try to squeeze it into a haiku that cannot come out of a haiku, into such a rigid form that is, thus I change styles. What is important to me is the soul more often, how I think I want the reader to perceive the poem, and the effect.
But one must not forget, form gives the poem unity, completeness often times. That is to say, your eyes are no good if you can't see to read, so you get glasses, and thus, you are more complete. If you stick with a Haiku, which is liking to having no glasses when you need them, you do more harm than good-and perhaps make both you and the poem more cumbersome and silly.
On the other, a good sonnet, and I've written a number of them, not a lot, but several, and the concluding line, the last line, the one with a rhyme word, to end it all, should be the spark for the whole poem: for the best effect: we see this in Shelley's work "Ozymandias (1817), so what did Shelly really do to make the poem so good. To me she picked out one thing, idea, perception, and picture, framed it, echoed it at the end, one thing one human experience the reader could hang onto, and she used the form of the poem to do this. Like a counselor would do in group therapy, such as turning off the lights, tell a story in a low tone, and when there was a great silence, he created from the beginning to the end, at the end, the last word would be the word he would want everyone to connect the story with later with. I done this in poetry as well as counseling being a license counselor, putting this form into poetry is not difficult for me, and Shelly does it wisely. Her last words in the poem being, "The lone and level sand stretch far away."
Tuesday, September 29, 2009
Writing a Romantic Love Poem
Almost everyone knows or has experienced romantic-type love at some time in their lives. Whether it was that first school age crush or puppy love, your first real relationship or even your current spouse, we have all felt this type of love. When most people think of love poetry, it is this very type of love that they are thinking about.
We're talking about the love between two people who care about each other and are attracted to each other in a romantic way. While there are many different types of love, this still remains one of the most well known and commonly expressed types so it is no surprise that quite a bit of poetry that is written is based on this.
There have been so many great poems written on romantic love and you can write your own. It's easy once you learn a few basic techniques and the ability to express your feelings openly. Even if you think you could never write a poem for your sweetie, it's possible.
As you can see, writing a romantic love poem is like opening up your heart for the other person to peer inside. The more open and honest you are, the better the resulting poem will be. Don't just try to copy a famous poem. Instead, really think about how the person makes you feel.
Love Does Many Splendid Things Poem
Church bells ring
Choir sounds with strings
And guests bring thinks;
Love-that which let the nose runs
Allows one to use plenty of napkins
While dribbling snot on the ground;
Love-allowing many
To wish for exciting things anytime, anywhere
Upon the sight of who knows who
Giggling and dribbling on one's self;
Love-spinning the mind
In time and space
Thoughts never going to waste
Sometimes it's just a disgrace;
Love-that which counters hate
Fills the mind, body and soul
With grace and fellowship
Lets the stomach flips and turns;
Love-sleepless nights alone
Wondering where, when, how, who
Why does it have to be?
One is unable to see through the dust
Until it clears;
Love-upon the rising sun one stretches
Touching soft skin, hair, cheek
Bringing a facial smile
Radiating all over, arousing
Happiness and sensations;
Love-singing songs, dancing along
Cheek to cheek, not even a peep
Softly squeezing, loosely gripping
Rose of splendor, petals unfurling;
Love-bubble bath at night, midday,
Doesn't matter where or when
Massage, splash of incense
Candle light, champagne, steak
Salad, slippers and fragrance;
Love-holding her right, not tight with all your
Might, but with the tip of your fingers
Touching her scalp, neck, breast,
Cuddling, whispering, humming
Breathlessly breathing someway, somehow;
Love-the essence of stars floating, harmonizing
Melodies, rhapsodies in various colors
Coming together, vibrating, musing
Celebrating moments of splendor
Bliss of the lips and cheeks;
Love-many crying, sighing
Smiling, leaping for joy
Pounding the desk, stumping dirt
Love-you make it what it's worth!
Fortune Cookie Poem
You need medicine for love since your heart is too strong
You could be like a lawyer taking a swim
Your dearest wish may pass you by one day
It's best to forget your friend especially if you owe them
You will find roses in the garden with no thrones-forget the gloves
Don't worry-we don't have flaws here
Keep talking, we love people with foot in mouth disease
Happiness is at your doorsteps. Go to work for me on Sunday
Throw some dirt at them. You have plenty ground left
Flattery will always get you a cup of coffee and a shoe shine
Sorry no jobs! But you're always on our list
Today is not the day to make new friends
The greatest gift is giving it all away today
A secret person will step on your toe tonight-stay home
Hate will get you through the gate each time
Love will get your slate cleaned and paying child support
You will see beauty in fine things-loose this ability
Ideas are like the ocean; you must sink or swim
You should have had a great time yesterday
Plan for the pleasures you missed last year by next week
Friends are presents you can always give away
A family member will visit you with three cats and two dogs
Your life will be what life is all about
The things you lost will never show up-get glasses
Happy news will come soon, get a HAM radio
Strong and bitter words indicate muscle growth from the wrong end!
Personalized Poems
This is where a Personalized Poem is ideal. You provide the special moments, anecdotes and experiences that are unique to the recipient and we do the rest! Let everyone else buy the trinkets, the ornaments - what they will truly value is something unique that only their nearest and dearest could ever orchestrate.
For the lad-about-town - why not remind him in a poem of the nights he'd rather forget? Why wait until his wedding to embarrass him within an inch of his life? He might have destroyed the pictures, but memories are harder to erase!
A poem could be a novel way to propose. There's a huge amount of pressure to find a unique and romantic way to ask the lady of your dreams to become your wife. What could be more romantic than a poem telling her exactly how you feel, something that she can treasure long after the wedding?
What about to your dear old Mum? She has given birth to you, nurtured you and in most people's situations, received little thanks. Show her you think she's the best by poetically thanking her. Just be warned, the sloppy kisses you had as a child could be back on the menu!
Sometimes it's not what you buy somebody that matters, it's the thought you put into it. Have you ever received daggers from the eyes of your loved one, when flowers from the garage were all you could muster for their birthday? Earn some brownie points and commission a poem. Save the chocs and socks for another time!
Heartbroken Poem May Ease Your Healing
Some people find that poetry is an easy way to express what they are thinking at a particular moment. The form and style it takes matters little unless you are hoping to publish your works in the future. There is no need to write an exceptional piece of work. The heartbroken poem is written to help you get over your grief and sadness; you don't have to show it to others. What matters is that, even if it does not heal the wound, the heartbroken poem gives you the therapy to help you to get over your pain, and move on.
When you face a break up or other period of sadness, it is important to be able to take the pain. You may feel that you should get on with life without facing up to what has really happened, but time will catch up with you. At some time, you will likely go through a period of sadness, so it is better to face up to it straight away, before moving on. A heartbreak poem may ease your healing and thus prove to be an excellent therapy when you have just gone through a break up from a person you really loved.
So what, if the quality of the poem is indifferent, as you wrote it only for yourself. You have to express your true thoughts, however difficult this may be. Write them in a simple form as if you were speaking to yourself. List down all the points you want to mention, just to help you clear your head. You can then put the list in some logical order prior to finally composing the poem.
When you have finished your heartbroken poem, why not write more about certain aspects of your sadness. Everything that will aid you in looking your pain in the face is all good therapy for helping you get over your grief and move on.
Should you decide to share your feelings with others, why not? Put it online if you want to, on one of the specialized sites designed for this, and tell other people whether or not you want to receive their comments. This way you can share apart of your life with others.
PMS Poem
Is your woman a mess?
Premenstrual syndrome
Enough to make a man
Run far from home
Sigh for relief and groan
Agonize internally
At the torturous extremity
The intense emotional variety
Heavy burden and complexity
Unexplainable tendency
Explosions expressed angrily
Profound ongoing irritability
Bitter and profuse insensitivity
Suffocating your pulmonary
Constraining you internally
Thrust upon you vociferously
As complaining incessantly
These are some symptoms
Of PMS manifesting monthly
Communication uttered derisively
Spoken foully, hurtfully, and harshly
Insults unable to be endured endlessly
As she goes from femininity to being pushy
Nevertheless a loving man does dare to be
Understanding, sympathetic, and affectionate
While grinning and bearing it patiently
Wondering how long this devilish cycle
Shall badger, bruise, and cause abuse
Fatiguing heart, mind, and body
Adversely affecting one's sanity
Seemingly hurting one's marital unity
Contaminating one's inner purity
Obstructing a life lived peaceably
Throwing a woman over the edge
Making her frail and full of hostility
Depressed and fearful with anxiety
Retaining water within physically
Thwarting her self-esteem bodily
Eroding her confidence outwardly
Causing great distress and breast tenderness
Making a sexually aroused man settle for less
As she pushes him away far from her chest
These days of menstruation, not enjoyable for men
While major changes occur in lovely mother hen
Fluctuations and mood swings that seem not to end
Hold on my brother and dear fellow male friend
Such torments and troubles must come to pass
They certainly shall not come to stay
Therefore let none of these get in the way
Nor obstruct your undying love this day
For you too shall be made strong and last long
Like a man, boldly arise with faith to overcome
Be steadfast, hold on, do not up and run
Protect, Master thyself, and show Stability
This is what PMS should mean to thee
Purge, Make-Up, and Strengthen for she
As she regains her sense of inner identity
Cleanses, forgives, and heals relationally
Processes her pain and reconciles fully
In this most crucial and pivotal season
Wherein there is found no rhyme or reason
PMS may definitely be sad, callous, and cruel
Surely nothing we men ever learned in school
Nevertheless over it we can surely reign and rule
Though these moments may not be much fun
Surely above the clouds there does shine the sun
Therefore lovingly and patiently oblige your woman.